Mainly just skimmed threw it, looks decent, i like your setting and how it aint in the modern times, one thing i would change is Vladimir's name. To me, Stephen( not pronounced Steven) and Vladimir are like the biggest roman names from europe. I think of europe, i see those 2 names lol, idk. If it was me, i'd google see what various names i could find to use instead of that name. It's like calling an american boy : Bob. Its just plain and kinda boring. And a bit too predictable. good story tho. ;)
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